Did my mind wander too far this time...? C/c?

I'm not too sure of the second line...? Any comments, thoughts or critique?

Sister, daughter, archetype
of innocence, youth and woe,
I know these parts
and play them well,
with keen wit
and bluntened rue,
I enunciate each
with proportioned abandon.
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....though for once I think I can see maybe why......
 
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