OK, I am bumping this, but with an addendum:
I believe I have ignored the rules here. Give me a few minutes from this post and I will happily critique at least one other persons work. If I've posted this in the wrong forum, feel free to tell me. As to what I'm asking of you guys...
To be honest, general comments - songwriting, arrangement, lyrics if you want, whatever you want to critique, good or bad, preferably constructive, y'know if you don't like it, some reason would be nice.
Anywho, cheers.
EDIT: Having glanced through the forum, I'm coming at this from a more songwriting/production point of view. Perhaps I am in the wrong place. Can anyone advise?
