Crowquill and Strummer521

I like the general gist of what you're getting at and I can see how it can improve, don't like the vocals, because firstly I can't hear em and secondly they seem very out of tune. Boost the vocals up about, add another guitar track and tune it up a little, even echo the original, just to add some depth. The whole thing feels like an interlude to me though.
 
Yeah, the vocals were a bit strange and much to quite, and it also sounRAB very empty, but the song could probably be good.
I also went to Ethan Smiths myspace page and I quite loved the song on that one:)
 
I enjoyed this quite a lot, you've definitely got some decent ideas there.

While I'm not suggesting it's derivative, it did make me think a LITTLE bit of Deerhunter (in a good way). Do you consider them among your influences?
 
I think Ben might listen to them, I don't though. I know he's into Deerhoof (or maybe it was deerhunter...) but yeah I'll get Ben to answer this question tomorrow.
 
Back
Top