Critique Poetry/Ideas (fixed)?

anthony

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I am reposting for un ability to view my work

here is the poem itself
I titled it "Worlds Anthem"
You can't win this fight

Until you realize that what we do ain't right

Blood and murder, white and black

Our world... goodness is something we all lack

Cowards hiding behind your politics

This world so vile its sick

All the hate in our hearts we must get rid

The love gone or at least well hid

The Sky our future so heartless, gray

All the little look up and pray

They wish for a 1 day


All their pain would go away

Still looking up at the sky

Wondering if something exists, wondering why

Some will never know, left to cry

Left to die.

We need to forget our differences

Leave out all the rest

Fight for humanity and acheive our best.

We have to learn to fight

Not each other but ourselves

Learn to fight for what's right.

For our future pure and bright.

We all know it seems impossible

Completely out of sight

We have to fight for others facing death

Breathing life's cruel last breath

Untie our conflict and unite for whats right

We can do anything as long as we try

With effort less will cry

Less will die

We have to become 1

The track were headed we will become none

No one with no purpose

What we believe is acheivable

What we stand for is who we are

What we can accomplish is far from surpassible

We are nothing until we fight together against ourselves.

This is our cry


This is our anthem

Most important, this is our plan
 
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