Critique Please?

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Minor_Desturbances

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A poem I wrote last night..

I am the darkness of the night.
The fear pulsing through your vains
I am the killer of the light
The one that causes all your pains.

I am the one who shrouds your soul
The one who guides you through the dark.

I am your guardian angel, fallen
The one you can't escape
I am the voice who answers your call.
The one who lifts you up.

I am the demon that you love
The one you love to hate.
I am the angel from above.
The one who seals your fate.

I am your dreams
The ones that haunt you
I am the one who glows the moon beams..
The only one to guide you.
 
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