critique on my poem please?

On a night like tonight,You bring me to life
And remind me there's another side of day.
Where I will see who you are ,More than a sky full of stars
And the worries of this world will fade away,On the other side of day.
Time is what gets to the best of us,Reminding all that it's not here for long
but you still hold the hands of time,And pave the way to Paradise.
and that's where your taking me
We're all in love alone, until we finally make it home
To a relm of wonder, where love is not a lie
And all we seek, we shall find, there our search will finally be over, where we abide.
 
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