Critique my poem written out of boredom?

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Shannon

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I was extremely bored, and was staring at my pink nail polish. Tell me what you think, if you hate the color pink! xD

pink nail polish

shiny and soft
held highly aloft
this subtle color
can get no duller

it wrinkles and runs
as friendly as guns
metallic and cold
boring colors get old

peeling and chipping
the brush i keep dipping
can't stop using this color
the bottle just gets fuller

painting the world
in an ugly pink swirl
giggles and sunshine
colors walk a fine line
 
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