Critique my poem please :)?

simple_mess11

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Drop me at the drop of a hat
Tilt it down and the tounges got the cat
I'm just a street sign you'll never read
And when you crash, I might start to believe
Playcate your heartbreak, keep it paralyzed
Stab a needle down, love sterilized
Hearing your laughter was only a plus
Keep it all cliche, if you must
Boast your meloncholy to a tolerable degree
Well honey you have happiness, but wont turn the key
Just dot the "i" and cross the "t"
You can stay forever, just not with me.
 
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