Critique my poem please? - For an english assignment?

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She wakes up each day,
To her own faulted dismay.
The pain he caused will never end,
Holding back strength to tell a soul,
While her face tells the world.
How do you open up about pain,
When your whole life you've kept quiet and insane,
When will the hurt disappear,
When all you want to do is curl up with no one to wipe your tears.
This whole thing is her fault,
She cried for her mother... her father.
Those moments she became a sin of his personal bother.
Even when she escaped the crime,
She knew she would never regain the time.
Her tears were his crystals; what he lived for.
Somewhere in the night,
You hear children crying.
Somewhere, those children wishing themselves or others dying.
Where have morals been while the ethics were hiding.
Somewhere in the night, her soul screams,
As people fade, few fall lost within their dreams.
Among reality he walks darkened and low as he lives high.
Somewhere in the night loneliness begins to dwell,
Humans prone to manic hell.
Somewhere, she wishes to die alone.
Somewhere in the night,
I wish for my hero. My savior.
My light in the dark of the silenced night.
 
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