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tepishane_13
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I know it still needs editing and stuff but that's why I need your help. Please tell me what you think of it and when you spot mistakes, kindly (or harshly [whichever way you prefer]) inform me of it. Constructive criticism is always welcome.
(Please be honest.)
Thanks very much.
I know it still needs editing and stuff but that's why I need your help. Please tell me what you think of it and when you spot mistakes, kindly (or harshly [whichever way you prefer]) inform me of it. Constructive criticism is always welcome.
(Please be honest.)
Thanks very much.