could someone please read my ode and let me know how to fix it?

Sarah Corda

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Red, Green, and White
The colors of Christmas time

Snow begins to fall down
Blankets of soft, thickness
Fresh pine trees begin to go on sale
When I hear the tunes of Christmas
Their jingles make me tingle
Oh Christmas, how I enjoy when you are near

When dainty decorations are put around everywhere
Each child is so happy and emerged with Christmas cheer
They listen to their parents and behave just right
Because St. Nicholas is watching
For Christmas is coming around the corner

When people come together
Smiles scattered on their faces
Sharing gifts, exchanging toys
And the laughter can be heard from miles away
‘Tis the season to be jolly

Red, Green, and White
I know that it is finally Christmas Time
 
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