THis is one of my first poems and i know i need alot of work, but would you say i could? I am planning on becoming a massage therapist but i love to write poetry. (P.S. im not emo or anything, its just easier for me to write sadder stuff)
Round and round
Im gagged and bound
no ones calling
i make no sound
A slap in the face
Being put in this case
six walls of cement
My lifes been erased
TEars fell in a cascade
My parents prayed
Now just a memory
even missing posters fade
Remembered on my birthday
though my body's shoved away
He's never confessed
to the crime he must pay
My name on a tombstone
My body in a warehouse
My soul in limbo
Round and round
Im gagged and bound
no ones calling
i make no sound
A slap in the face
Being put in this case
six walls of cement
My lifes been erased
TEars fell in a cascade
My parents prayed
Now just a memory
even missing posters fade
Remembered on my birthday
though my body's shoved away
He's never confessed
to the crime he must pay
My name on a tombstone
My body in a warehouse
My soul in limbo