Also dude, not to sound like a stalker but I noticed you combined those 3 poems in your wordpress. I have to say I felt as though they should have been together all along (whether or not that was your original intention, just saying)
it wasn't actually my original intention - all 3 were written seperately (though obviously first and third bits are written in the same style), but they all have the same general theme so i thought maybe putting them together would be good