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LeenieLuvsYou

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Somewhere in my dreams tonight
I'll see you standing there
You look at me with a smile
"Life isn't always fair"

You say you were chosen for his garden
His preciously hand picked bouquet
"God really needed me,
That's why I couldn't stay"

It's said to be that angels
Are sent from above
I've always had my angel
My brother - whose heart was filled with love

Wherever the ocean meets the sky
There will be memories of you and I
When I look up at that sky so blue
All I see are visions of you
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I read it at my friend's funeral today, but i wasn't sure if it was cheesy or not, and i wanted your guys' opinion.

And i know it says brother. He was like a brother to me, even though he wasn't a biological, or a half brother, or a step brother, he was still a brother to me. He was still part of my family
 
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