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Softly, so sweetly,
A tear would be made beautiful.
That’s you, the pain in my chest,
The touch I wish would comfort me,

Softly, so sweetly,
Only you can see,
The real, true, honest me,
We were so close, so close.

Softly, so sweetly,
You live inside my thoughts,
To keep me company
On the hardest days

Softly, so sweetly,
We were real,
The only days when I was complete,
Now I’m empty, again.

Softly, so sweetly,
Only you.
 
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