Comment on my poem please?

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simple_mess11

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Drop me at the drop of a hat
Tilt it down and the tounges got the cat
I'm just a street sign you'll never read
And when you crash, I might start to believe
Playcate your heartbreak, keep it paralyzed
Stab a needle down, love sterilized
Hearing your laughter was only a plus
Keep it all cliche, if you must
Boast your meloncholy to a tolerable degree
Well honey you have happiness, but wont turn the key
Just dot the "i" and cross the "t"
You can stay forever, just not with me.
 
OmG That's the most awsomest thing i've heard all day.
You have skills no lie. You really should take this as a career if you can. Gosh that;s a great poem, turn it into a song and put it on youtube.
 
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