Come fly with me.... This ANOTHER new poem I made.. Give me thoughts?

[R.I.P. Hip Hop 1978-2003]

Come fly with me

Come fly with me
To the heavens above
Spread our wings
Share our love
Our love symbolizes a dove
A swan in the pond
Come fly with me
To a peaceful scenery
The sun is bright
The grass is green
Birds chirp
For all eternity
Flying away from earth
Place of darkness and hurt
Considering it the past
Let’s fly from it
Dance on the stars
Flying oh so far
Come fly with me

 

[shirleyf]

I would love to! Beautiful writing this morning. I can feel your spirit soar in this. Keep writing, I enjoy reading.

p.s. I don't have time to read your other one...gotta work. I'll be back later.

 

[BB_im_lucky!]

damn, you got the words right.

seriously, you keep writin lyk dis, you'll have da birds all ova u!
nice real nice.

keep on at it

xXx

 

[BB_im_lucky!]

damn, you got the words right.

seriously, you keep writin lyk dis, you'll have da birds all ova u!
nice real nice.

keep on at it

xXx