I began to write my college essay and so far, everything is solid except my introduction.... which is the most important part. If someone could help me out, I'd really appreciate it.
Ever since I was a freshman in high school, I knew exactly what I wanted to do for the rest of my life. Since adolescence, I had a fondness for the medical field, and I’ve been determined to help those less privileged than myself. When I was fourteen years old, I was introduced to an organization called The Friendship Circle, weekly volunteer activity where you and a partner would play with a special needs child. At the end of every week, each little boy or girl knew that they had at least two friends which loved and cared about them.
Ever since I was a freshman in high school, I knew exactly what I wanted to do for the rest of my life. Since adolescence, I had a fondness for the medical field, and I’ve been determined to help those less privileged than myself. When I was fourteen years old, I was introduced to an organization called The Friendship Circle, weekly volunteer activity where you and a partner would play with a special needs child. At the end of every week, each little boy or girl knew that they had at least two friends which loved and cared about them.