Check out these raps?

kanyeezy_09

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I'm 14, new to rapping, and I'm just looking for some tips...I want to know if my raps sound right or what I should improve. Thanks. **Note: In my mind, the first one is better, so i prefer you check that out.

http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=Akq6YZW69_k14wUQpDq_j5Tsy6IX;_ylv=3?qid=20100730145552AAa7Y8z


http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=Auw4xn1VMDgKzUUIR0jpFiXsy6IX;_ylv=3?qid=20100730152022AAkftdg
 
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