Little Vacation
New member
The instructions say...
"Prepare an outline of three or four paragraphs with the subject "the best job I ever had." If you've never had a job, write about housework or any other work."
The next page gives space for a title (even though it gave the subject like it was a title) and the spaces. This is what I wrote:
Title: My time as a forum administrator
I. What my job was
A. Solving member conflicts
B. Answering questions
C. Updating the news
II. How I became an admin
A. My beginnings/history as a member
B. My reputation
C. My activity/participation
III. Why did I like my job?
A. I loved the community
B. I liked the authority
C. I liked helping people
IV. What it taught me
A. Neutrality in arguments
B. Think before you type
C. Don't get offended so easily
I know it's probably wordy and there are no subpoints because the page is pre-formatted with lines, but what should I change and are these main points okay? Thanks.
"Prepare an outline of three or four paragraphs with the subject "the best job I ever had." If you've never had a job, write about housework or any other work."
The next page gives space for a title (even though it gave the subject like it was a title) and the spaces. This is what I wrote:
Title: My time as a forum administrator
I. What my job was
A. Solving member conflicts
B. Answering questions
C. Updating the news
II. How I became an admin
A. My beginnings/history as a member
B. My reputation
C. My activity/participation
III. Why did I like my job?
A. I loved the community
B. I liked the authority
C. I liked helping people
IV. What it taught me
A. Neutrality in arguments
B. Think before you type
C. Don't get offended so easily
I know it's probably wordy and there are no subpoints because the page is pre-formatted with lines, but what should I change and are these main points okay? Thanks.