Haggard Laggard
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Fall Away, Darling: By, Haggard Laggard (Me)
Fading away over the dusty hills of Maine,
Propelling forward towards,
The smokey mountains ahead.
Trying to find themselves in a song,
Searching for their souls among writings,
Ideal upon ideal,
Bringing forward a new view,
Of their worlds,
Dancing among their thoughts.
Racing minds trailing along,
Thumping the hard cover of days,
Burning stacks of cash to show rebellion against,
Forlorn proverbs of society.
Throwing their slapstick out,
of the rickety building tops,
Endings for-bringing endings,
Seen over the roofs,
Mending into the asphalt with pandemics,
of disease and mounds of mindsets.
Rebound;
Bouncing along the hallways,
Calling for your reaches,
These thoughts;
Come and thrive.
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I need to know what you think. Is it at least kind of understandable? I want people to be able to find their own meaning. But I don't want it to sound like a mindless ramble. Also, sorry for the length. Thank you in advance for your input.
Fading away over the dusty hills of Maine,
Propelling forward towards,
The smokey mountains ahead.
Trying to find themselves in a song,
Searching for their souls among writings,
Ideal upon ideal,
Bringing forward a new view,
Of their worlds,
Dancing among their thoughts.
Racing minds trailing along,
Thumping the hard cover of days,
Burning stacks of cash to show rebellion against,
Forlorn proverbs of society.
Throwing their slapstick out,
of the rickety building tops,
Endings for-bringing endings,
Seen over the roofs,
Mending into the asphalt with pandemics,
of disease and mounds of mindsets.
Rebound;
Bouncing along the hallways,
Calling for your reaches,
These thoughts;
Come and thrive.
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I need to know what you think. Is it at least kind of understandable? I want people to be able to find their own meaning. But I don't want it to sound like a mindless ramble. Also, sorry for the length. Thank you in advance for your input.