Can you read my short letter for language arts? 10 pts to be answer?

Dear Mr. (teacher):


In this English 11 A class I hope for a lot of things. I want to have fun but learn new things at the same time and be prepared for college. I hope to be able to write well through papers and stories; also to be able to have nice, structured speeches without getting nervous about presenting them. I want to be able to keep up with every thing and pay attention. Over-all, I want to succeed and get an A your class.

I fear a lot of things this trimester. I do not want to be bored and not be able to understand any of the things I am being taught. I fear that I will not write my papers well enough. I also fear that I will get nervous and do poorly on my speeches. I do not want to slack off and get behind. To summarize, I fear that I could do poorly in your class.

I have struggled with English a lot in the past. I tend to not always do my homework and not pay attention. I get distracted easily which causes me to miss out on a lot of important material I should know. My bad habits usually reflect on my grade which I do not want to happen again. As my conclusion, I hope not to struggle this year and do really well with your assistance and teaching.

Sincerely,



(my name)



I am not asking anyone to do my homeowkr obviously, I already did it my self then I had a friend proofread it and fix it and now im having just yahoo answers proofread it then im gona have my mom proofread so im honestly not cheating. I just wana get an A and this is our first assignemtn

just fix anything that is too wordy or make simpler and more mature. and feel free to use different words like u no, like if i said good and u wanted to say a better vocab word.

thanks so much :)
 
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