Can you rate my poem!?!?!??!?!?!?

Terrel G

New member
Hey i wrote this for my gf. yea the last line doesn't rhyme cuss i could find anything. tell me if you know a word that can rhyme thanks. and tell me what you think and comments. thanks

we will always be
no matter what
your all i see
your my portrait

before it was blank
now there is color
to be quite frank
it's still a blur

but slowly it changes
becoming more defined
no more guesses
if we'd unwind

the picture is clear
it's you and me
I'm holding you dear
yet so gently

Now i know
what to expect
like a rainbow
were perfect

I'm the painter
your my Mona
there's no blur
when I paint us
 
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