can you please rate my rap/poem lyrics?

groweing up next to LA were ill be everyday
cruising down low to Venice Beach getting love
knoweing in this city everything an arranged bouquet
stopping by watts to go out and see my real thugs
sipping on that Hennessey all night yea ya know cuh
yelling were the weed at, just look across the street
because LA has the best kind of sparkling green
cause getting high in LA makes me feel complete
everyone out throweing up there hood makeing a scene
knoweing back in the day we were mean killing machines
going down Compton were everythings bumpin
stop to play some basketball with the real street ballers
were its more than just a game so better start runnin
in LA everyone trying to make that simple dollar
didn't matter what skin color,cause we couldn't afford a scholar
 
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