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I would like to describe myself as an Individual with a very balanced outlook and as someone who firmly believes in consistent self-improvement. The philosophy “I think, therefore I am” represents the essence of all my learning. I look forward to making a career in the entertainment industry.My strengths that I value the most are a high degree of inquistiveness and an absolute commitment in every task that I undertake. I dedicatedly need to work upon my time management skills to optimize my efficiency.The activities that I find engaging are adventure sports, swimming, cycling, travelling, reading, philately, numismatics and collecting anything that is antiquarian. My parents and close friends have always been a source of never ending encouragement for me. They sincerely cherish my never-give-up attitude and adore my creative abilities. They have seen me evolve as a person who likes to work smart and party hard. I apply in this prestigious institution to make my education a wonderful experience which will eventually help me in improving my career graph.