Can you please help me uncover this poem (or part of this poem)?

Brenda N

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Relentless, black on white, the cable runs
through metal arches up the mountain side.
At intervals giant pickaxes are hung on king hydraulic springs. The skiers ride propped by the axehead, twin automatons
supported by its handle, one each side.

In twos they move slow motion up the steep
incision in the mountain. Climb. Climb.
Somnambulists, bolt upright in their sleep
their phantom poles swung lazily behind,
while to the right, the empty T-bars keep
in mute descent, slow monstrous jigging time.

Captive the skiers now and innocent,
wards of eternity, each pair alone.
They mount the easy Vertical ascent,
pass through successive naves, are newly wed
participants in some recurring dream.

So do they move forever. Clocks are broken.
In zones of silence they grow tall and slow,
inanimate dreamers, mild and gentle-spoken
blood-brothers of the haemophilic snow
until the summit breaks and they awaken
images from the stricture of the tow.

Jerked from her chrysalis the sleeping bride
suffers too sudden freedom like a pain.
The dreaming bridegroom severed from her side
singles her out, the old wound aches again.
Uncertain, lost upon a wintry height
these two, not seperate, but no longer one.

Now clocks begin to peck and sing. The slow
extended minute like a rubber band
contracts to catapult them through the snow
in tandem trajectory while behind
etching the sky-line, obdurate and slow
the spastic T-bars pivot and descend.
 
It's some poem you wrote to try and promote yourself, would be my guess. Not. Gonna. Google.

EDIT TO ADD: My God, what a horrible poem. One of the worst I've ever read. I have several rules about poems. One is this: Any poem that contains two uses of "T-bars" is automatically shite.

(The poem fails on many other rules also.)
 
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