Can you please edit/comment on my short poem. thanks :)?

emi

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so im working on this letter/poem. i was thinking of showing it to my friend. i think she needs it more than me right now. writting has always helped me express what i feel and im hoping this helps me out now and her too...any suggestion/correction or comments are greatly appreciated- since this is a work in progress...thanks :)

Sometimes life breaks you into a million tiny little pieces. And you have no option but to glue yourself back together again. And Sure you might never be the same again- little words, anything really might remind you, of how things used to be of how you used to be. But just know that this new you can fix itself, you can put yourself back together, no matter how hard or how many times life breaks you! It won’t be easy but you will get through it. You will find a way through; that silver lining does exist you just have to find it, but it’s out there. Just waiting, waiting for the day you pick yourself up- that day when the sparkle in your eyes finally returns and you realize that you’re still you, and these open raw bleeding wounds will eventually heal. Some wounds will undoubtedly leave bigger scars than others, but that doesn’t matter because you will realize now that underneath everything you will always remain. Under all the blood, the tears, and the pain you’re still there. And one day you will feel whole again, you just have to be patient and let time do its job.
 
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