Can you help me with this poem?

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In my country there is a short piece of poem called "My Khaki Uniform" that the literal translation of which is as follows:
This shirt is always on me as long as my head is on my body. The day I give my life (head) it will also be my shroud. I tried to change the translation to a poem-like piece of writing. Could you please help me refine it?
This shirt/khaki will be on me
As long (as) the head is on me
It'll also cover my corpse
The day my head is off me

Thank you very much
 
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