I'm learning English. Below is a small composition - English Club - in our English Examination. Would you please kindly help me to polish it. Thanks a lot.
"Today I'll talk about our English club. Our English club was set up two months ago. Now we have members of 25. We meet once a week on Saturday afternoon. So far we have conducted a variety of activities on English learning, such as watching English films, a Christmas party and getting together with foreign students. Last week we held an English story-telling contest. We required that the entries be original and interesting and be presented in English within five minutes. Every member took an active part in the activity. Two foreign English teachers were invited to act as judges. At last Li Bing won the first place. Many members said the activity benefited them in many ways. Not only did it improve their spoken English, but also it brought them much fun. They hope many such activities can be held."
"Today I'll talk about our English club. Our English club was set up two months ago. Now we have members of 25. We meet once a week on Saturday afternoon. So far we have conducted a variety of activities on English learning, such as watching English films, a Christmas party and getting together with foreign students. Last week we held an English story-telling contest. We required that the entries be original and interesting and be presented in English within five minutes. Every member took an active part in the activity. Two foreign English teachers were invited to act as judges. At last Li Bing won the first place. Many members said the activity benefited them in many ways. Not only did it improve their spoken English, but also it brought them much fun. They hope many such activities can be held."