I need help perfecting the following blurb I have written!
Having to spy on students for the school chaplain isn’t the most common assignment received, especially if the chaplain is your mother! When Caitlin Beth is hired by her Mom (Mary) to spy on Dean Smith High, Caitlin’s life takes an abrupt turn.
Having to inconspicuously put tabs on people with personal issues is Caitlin’s past, present and future. Her own past has many complications that still affect her life. Caitlin and her twin sister (Jade) are still grieving over the kidnapping of their oldest sister, Claudia – which took place two years ago. Too make matters worse, Claudia was kidnapped by Fred, her step father.
When Caitlin’s attention heads towards the mysterious and highly secretive Zachariah Lloyd, she realises that she isn’t the only one with a past worth forgetting. He is a complete mystery to all students which makes him that much more interesting.
What is so tormenting in Zachary’s life that he must put up a facade for all those who lay eyes upon him? Caitlin’s mission to help Zachary can turn into many things. For one, Zachary will do all he can to keep his life hidden from everyone, in particular, Caitlin. In result, they can become mortal enemies. But maybe the fight to keep Caitlin away will have the opposite effect.
Will Caitlin succeed in her mission? Or will Zachary accomplish scaring Caitlin away?
There may be some grammatical errors. I need your help! Is it interesting enough? Also, what genre do you think this story will come under. Sci-fi, Drama, Romance etc! Thanks =)
Having to spy on students for the school chaplain isn’t the most common assignment received, especially if the chaplain is your mother! When Caitlin Beth is hired by her Mom (Mary) to spy on Dean Smith High, Caitlin’s life takes an abrupt turn.
Having to inconspicuously put tabs on people with personal issues is Caitlin’s past, present and future. Her own past has many complications that still affect her life. Caitlin and her twin sister (Jade) are still grieving over the kidnapping of their oldest sister, Claudia – which took place two years ago. Too make matters worse, Claudia was kidnapped by Fred, her step father.
When Caitlin’s attention heads towards the mysterious and highly secretive Zachariah Lloyd, she realises that she isn’t the only one with a past worth forgetting. He is a complete mystery to all students which makes him that much more interesting.
What is so tormenting in Zachary’s life that he must put up a facade for all those who lay eyes upon him? Caitlin’s mission to help Zachary can turn into many things. For one, Zachary will do all he can to keep his life hidden from everyone, in particular, Caitlin. In result, they can become mortal enemies. But maybe the fight to keep Caitlin away will have the opposite effect.
Will Caitlin succeed in her mission? Or will Zachary accomplish scaring Caitlin away?
There may be some grammatical errors. I need your help! Is it interesting enough? Also, what genre do you think this story will come under. Sci-fi, Drama, Romance etc! Thanks =)