Can you help me out with the (Last) paragraphs of my Iraq War Essay?

Alan Greenspan who served for chairman of the Federal Reserve for almost 2 decades said 'I am saddened that it is politically inconvenient to acknowledge what everyone knows: the Iraq war is largely about oil.' The Iraq war has cost our country over 3 trillion dollars. This has shattered our economy and has caused us to borrow money that we don’t have. The invasion into Iraq has caused such a broad multitude of suffering across the globe. Our standing in the world has fallen dramatically since our invasion, our economy is the weakest it’s been since the Great Depression and we face a financial crisis that is complex for most Americans to even begin to absorb. All of these problems we face at large today stem from our initial decision to invade Iraq in 2003. We have incited a great amount of hatred toward their people that America wants to police the world and tell others how to live when this invasion is far from what America truly stands for.
When America goes to war, it needs to be to be for just reasons, backed by solid evidence that we are at threat. Although President Bush told us the Iraqi’s posed a grave threat to our country it was more a matter of misleading information that has caused an catastrophic amount of damage to our country and around the world damaging the world’s economy and our standing in the world. We cannot forgive the fact that Iraq was invaded ignoring the sacred document of our land, the constitution by going to war without congressional approval. I do not approve of breaking the principles upon which this country was founded.


Please correct any errors... Thank you!!!
This essay is my opinion. I'm just presenting my side of the issue, and I'm not asking you to voice your opinion... I just want to make sure it is grammatically correct and sounds okay...

Just letting you know... cause some people don't get that lol...
 
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