Hello everyone, I need to write riddle poem for my english class and I'm not too sure how well I did it. I'm was never a fan of poem and am a little to dense for it, but I try. Can you guess this riddle? If there anything you think should be fix to improve on, please let me know. I might have to read this out loud.
What am I
a parasite on boney finger
a globe that stand without legs
I breath without a nose, feed without a mouth
Nectar so sweet, I lure the white maiden into dream
A pure soul at youth, darken over time
Without blood, money, gold, I cannot exit
What am I
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I’m a apple
Remember if there anything that you think should be improve or fix, please make suggestion and comment. Thank you.
Some of the stuff really doesn't make sense do it, in the par the say "nectar so swee and ect" I was trying to refer to the story of snow white.
What am I
a parasite on boney finger
a globe that stand without legs
I breath without a nose, feed without a mouth
Nectar so sweet, I lure the white maiden into dream
A pure soul at youth, darken over time
Without blood, money, gold, I cannot exit
What am I
.................
...............
...................
I’m a apple
Remember if there anything that you think should be improve or fix, please make suggestion and comment. Thank you.
Some of the stuff really doesn't make sense do it, in the par the say "nectar so swee and ect" I was trying to refer to the story of snow white.