Bob Turner
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Me and my friends are planning on making a movie, but we can't think of a bigggg twist. Here's what we have so far :
A man comes back tired from work to his apartment late at night, drinks water and goes to sleep. At around 2 o clock, he hears a knocking on the door. He opens it to see no one there. He tries sleeping only to be waken up to hear another knock. This time he opens the door and still doesn't find anything. He goes out into the hallway and keeps walking into the adjacent hallway, but he doesn't see anything there. He starts coming back, but now he sees a shadow of a man standing in the hallway in silhouette. He asks about his identity, but gets no reply. The next moment, the shadow shoots the man in the chest.
He find's out that he actually has been dreaming and starts sweating heavily. He gets up, goes to the bathroom, washes his face. But by the time he looks up into the mirror, he sees the shadow again in the back in the mirror.....................
Thats what we got.....its an approx. 7 min long film, and I wanna include some psychological disorder kind of twist. Do you have any ideas? For reference, you can checkout DOODLEBUG and SLAPEN on youtube to understand what exactly I want....plzzz help me out. Plzzz
A man comes back tired from work to his apartment late at night, drinks water and goes to sleep. At around 2 o clock, he hears a knocking on the door. He opens it to see no one there. He tries sleeping only to be waken up to hear another knock. This time he opens the door and still doesn't find anything. He goes out into the hallway and keeps walking into the adjacent hallway, but he doesn't see anything there. He starts coming back, but now he sees a shadow of a man standing in the hallway in silhouette. He asks about his identity, but gets no reply. The next moment, the shadow shoots the man in the chest.
He find's out that he actually has been dreaming and starts sweating heavily. He gets up, goes to the bathroom, washes his face. But by the time he looks up into the mirror, he sees the shadow again in the back in the mirror.....................
Thats what we got.....its an approx. 7 min long film, and I wanna include some psychological disorder kind of twist. Do you have any ideas? For reference, you can checkout DOODLEBUG and SLAPEN on youtube to understand what exactly I want....plzzz help me out. Plzzz