Can you evaluate this poem please?

786 – 27 January 2011 – Zahid from Pakistan

I AM RECALLED BY HER

Here brutal words
Walking on the surface of my heart
She did not care to utter
If do or don’t hurt

She has her direction
She moved on
Ignoring me
As I am an illegitimate birth

Though I don’t blame her
She did it unintentionally
She still wants my love
To display it among her lovers

This is my victory
Her lovers know her through me
When she is loved
I am recalled by her
 
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