Im thinking about making a rap song, but I need some opinions on my lyrics. Honest answers.
i got tru's i aint wear since the fitting room
spoiled brat, i dont want you to assume
being gucci is my religion
october 31st, thats my costume
i feel the air trying to rain on my brain'
my flow so hot, even when the weather change
all this stress all i got is one bitch, waking up day n night dealing with that shit. your not too bright, re do your rhymes, this is just a freestyle, giving you something lightbye bye, sorry you didnt get to say high, but im on a plane to cloud nine, look up at the sky, its night time..
your style is outdated, destroyed and vacated. listen to my rhymes and let me demonstrate it. i never rhymes about living off meds or running from the feds. shit was played out in the 90's 2pac was dead. live in that 21 first century, your flow is elementary and the theme is history. real mcs rap about they life and what they go through, not about killing bitches and what they do. real rap comes from the mind and soul, not about what you stole and how you got on parole.
i got tru's i aint wear since the fitting room
spoiled brat, i dont want you to assume
being gucci is my religion
october 31st, thats my costume
i feel the air trying to rain on my brain'
my flow so hot, even when the weather change
all this stress all i got is one bitch, waking up day n night dealing with that shit. your not too bright, re do your rhymes, this is just a freestyle, giving you something lightbye bye, sorry you didnt get to say high, but im on a plane to cloud nine, look up at the sky, its night time..
your style is outdated, destroyed and vacated. listen to my rhymes and let me demonstrate it. i never rhymes about living off meds or running from the feds. shit was played out in the 90's 2pac was dead. live in that 21 first century, your flow is elementary and the theme is history. real mcs rap about they life and what they go through, not about killing bitches and what they do. real rap comes from the mind and soul, not about what you stole and how you got on parole.