Rachel Armstrong
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I'm a 13 year old girl. I tried writing my emotions out. I need some help. Any opinions?
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You were my first love who meant everything to me.
Then suddenly you said we weren’t meant to be.
That night my whole life came crashing down.
There were so many tears, I felt as if I would drown.
Weeks went by and our memories faded.
By then, you had “upgraded”.
One night your name lit up my phone.
My mind was absolutely blown.
Days passed, we were back together.
In love we would stay, forever.
You broke my heart once again.
Instead of my heart, I should have used my brain.
The summer months came.
I made some mistakes to where I’d never be the same.
Summer went by fast.
I would leave all these memories in the past.
I showed up to school a changed girl.
I saw you and my heart went into a whirl.
You were different, I could tell.
I wanted to break out of my shell.
I actually texted you.
Together we were again, stuck like glue.
“I love you more than you could imagine”, were words you once spoke.
Even after those words were said, we were over, I was once again broke.
You ruined my heart.
My life needed a change, a total restart.
I tried to forget everything we had together.
I knew I would love you forever.
You act as if you’re the victim in this whole ordeal.
I’m the one with the heart that won’t heal.
You told my best friend that I ruin everything.
I wish our relationship was just a fling.
I never meant anything to you.
I could have been the gum on your shoe.
The sad thing is I believed everything you ever said.
I sure wish I wouldn't have used my heart, but my brain instead
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You were my first love who meant everything to me.
Then suddenly you said we weren’t meant to be.
That night my whole life came crashing down.
There were so many tears, I felt as if I would drown.
Weeks went by and our memories faded.
By then, you had “upgraded”.
One night your name lit up my phone.
My mind was absolutely blown.
Days passed, we were back together.
In love we would stay, forever.
You broke my heart once again.
Instead of my heart, I should have used my brain.
The summer months came.
I made some mistakes to where I’d never be the same.
Summer went by fast.
I would leave all these memories in the past.
I showed up to school a changed girl.
I saw you and my heart went into a whirl.
You were different, I could tell.
I wanted to break out of my shell.
I actually texted you.
Together we were again, stuck like glue.
“I love you more than you could imagine”, were words you once spoke.
Even after those words were said, we were over, I was once again broke.
You ruined my heart.
My life needed a change, a total restart.
I tried to forget everything we had together.
I knew I would love you forever.
You act as if you’re the victim in this whole ordeal.
I’m the one with the heart that won’t heal.
You told my best friend that I ruin everything.
I wish our relationship was just a fling.
I never meant anything to you.
I could have been the gum on your shoe.
The sad thing is I believed everything you ever said.
I sure wish I wouldn't have used my heart, but my brain instead