Shabooopie
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The worst part of writing for me is starting a story. So I need your help.
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Basic Summary:
Trinity and her parents are traveling to Ireland to attend her sister, Jessica’s, wedding. Trinity arrives a week after the parents because she had to stay and write final exams. When she arrives at her sister’s large mansion, almost everyone is asleep. She settles into her new room and quickly falls asleep. When she goes downstairs for breakfast, she is surprised to see a different family than her own sitting at the breakfast table – especially the gorgeous boy at the end of the nook. Jessica dances in and introduces everyone and how they know each other – The Wilson’s are long time friends with Paxton. They are staying to help set up the wedding.
Trinity spends time with the Wilson’s, especially Alec and Gabriel. Gabriel and Trinity become romantically involved – even going as far as sex. She begins to notice something odd about the boys – they do not seem human. She asks Gabriel about it – confronting him with the fact that she knows he is not human, but cannot put her finger on it. Gabriel cuts off their friendship, giving her the complete silent treatment. Sad, confused, and hurting – she goes to Gabriel’s father, Eldon. Eldon is astounded to hear her story, but does not touch the subject as to what they are. Suddenly, Gabriel brings another girl around. Frustrated and sad inside, Trinity plans a shopping trip into town with Jessica – to talk to her about Gabriel. Then she meets a cute cashier and asks him to hang out. Gabriel is furious about it; he completely locks the door between their two rooms. The day before the wedding, Trinity bursts into his room, in tears, demanding him to tell her the truth about everything. Therefore, he does. They get back together blah blah blah. Then, in the end, Trinity has to find a way to get Gabriel and his family to the Other side – because they are stuck as ghosts.
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Anyway, I need your help with how to start it. I want Trinity to arrive late at night, while it's raining, by cab. She knocks on the door and her sister answers.
That's it ^^
I know what I want, I just don't know how to word it properly. I'm really hoping you'll answer.
Thanks!
* 6 minutes ago
* - 4 days left to answer.
Additional Details
Jessica = Trinity's sister.
Paxton = Jessica's fiance.
Alec = Gabriel's brother
Gabriel = Trinity's soon to be love interest.
Eldon = Alec's & Gabriel's father.
Celia= Alec's & Gabriel's sister.
Carla= Alec's & Gabriel's mother.
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Basic Summary:
Trinity and her parents are traveling to Ireland to attend her sister, Jessica’s, wedding. Trinity arrives a week after the parents because she had to stay and write final exams. When she arrives at her sister’s large mansion, almost everyone is asleep. She settles into her new room and quickly falls asleep. When she goes downstairs for breakfast, she is surprised to see a different family than her own sitting at the breakfast table – especially the gorgeous boy at the end of the nook. Jessica dances in and introduces everyone and how they know each other – The Wilson’s are long time friends with Paxton. They are staying to help set up the wedding.
Trinity spends time with the Wilson’s, especially Alec and Gabriel. Gabriel and Trinity become romantically involved – even going as far as sex. She begins to notice something odd about the boys – they do not seem human. She asks Gabriel about it – confronting him with the fact that she knows he is not human, but cannot put her finger on it. Gabriel cuts off their friendship, giving her the complete silent treatment. Sad, confused, and hurting – she goes to Gabriel’s father, Eldon. Eldon is astounded to hear her story, but does not touch the subject as to what they are. Suddenly, Gabriel brings another girl around. Frustrated and sad inside, Trinity plans a shopping trip into town with Jessica – to talk to her about Gabriel. Then she meets a cute cashier and asks him to hang out. Gabriel is furious about it; he completely locks the door between their two rooms. The day before the wedding, Trinity bursts into his room, in tears, demanding him to tell her the truth about everything. Therefore, he does. They get back together blah blah blah. Then, in the end, Trinity has to find a way to get Gabriel and his family to the Other side – because they are stuck as ghosts.
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Anyway, I need your help with how to start it. I want Trinity to arrive late at night, while it's raining, by cab. She knocks on the door and her sister answers.
That's it ^^
I know what I want, I just don't know how to word it properly. I'm really hoping you'll answer.
Thanks!
* 6 minutes ago
* - 4 days left to answer.
Additional Details
Jessica = Trinity's sister.
Paxton = Jessica's fiance.
Alec = Gabriel's brother
Gabriel = Trinity's soon to be love interest.
Eldon = Alec's & Gabriel's father.
Celia= Alec's & Gabriel's sister.
Carla= Alec's & Gabriel's mother.