can someone edit my sonnet ? idk about the punctuation and grammar. !?

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I was born as a child nonchalant.
Misplaced in a listless world filled with rights,
I am still that little girl nobody wants.
Nobody recognized my abundant plights.
Prohibited from a society,
I was left feeling alone and cried twice.
Here I stand with my absent dignity,
but now I implore for my sacrifice.
Day by day im a liability,
you were never by my side when needed.
I stand here showing my ability,
I felt like no one, well you succeeded.
I am the child you once discarded,
I am the child with my heart guarded.
 
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