Can somebody please read and review my story. It's still in production theres...

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...alot more editing to go.? Im still thinking of adding more to the story making a bit longer, but until then I would greatly appreciate any comments on the story. Also what you thought was the underlying message in the story was.

Thankyou

STORY-http://tinyurl.com/5epl5z
 
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