Can I get some feedback on these lyrics?

V

Vasiq

New member
I know it makes much more sense to post recordings, but we dont have the money for it yet.
Spoiled

It will be a long day
So dont forget your shell
You wouldn't anyway
Gotta make the sale
Put on your new pair
of faded jeans
that and your torn cap
you just bought last week YA!

chorus:
we're all sedated
completely wasted
I'm feeling naked
get me a blanket
Im just too lazy
masterbate me
catch me faking
like im mating HEY!

What will the others think?
Maybe that you're a fag
But your shirt is pink
So you're a real man
Good thing for the holes
proving experience
Too bad we all know
you're just delirius YA!

In Jesus' Name

I'm so afraid
I'll do what you do
I'll say what you say
I'll think what you think
We have the truth
I will not stray
Ill sell my soul
In Jesus' name

I dont like fun
Its all a sin
I hate my frienRAB
for the lives they live
I want to give myself
I like to hate myself
And I would kill myself
In Jesus' name

This means war
They're to blame
Mary's a whore
God is great
This means war
Our children trained
to kill them all
in Jesus' name
 
nothing eh? Could you tell me the lines you hate the most?

Sitting by myself on the sidewalk
Thinking how I'm cold as hell
I wish I could get my mind straight
Ya I wish my fate wasn't real
I want someone to speak without a lie
And tell me that I'm gonna be fine
Its funny how time can move so slow
When you've got nowhere to go oh oh

Tonight its storming
Nothing is warm but
I've got coins for
The liquor store and
All these forties mean
No good mornings but
its so boring ya
boring boring

Walking by myself on the boardwalk
Looking at the ocean swells
I wish I could buy my own island
And forget about the horror land
People ignore the ugly ones
I feel like im an alien
I dont remember the abduction
but i was probably just fucked up
 
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