Can i get some feedback on my poem?

figgle

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All born on a balance

A drop in the ocean

A clock's motion

A fate free of faith

Into existance surely random

All live to learn

From a different spectrum

All born of balance

As the moon in night

As the sun's light

The blood on the ground

The humility found

Somber thoughts turn shrewd

Profound minds seek extravegence

A flower found in a field of fighting

Evil is but pure alone

Opposites obverse

Take a drop

It all falls apart

Only the beginning
 
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