ms. blacksmith
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I've been writing poems for like two years now... but i never studied poetry, so i never kno if what i write can be called a poem or not ...
that's one of the most recent poems i wrote:
Significant noise
When all lights are off
Every breath is gone
And sounds are down
I would still hear a significant noise
Trembling strings
The song he sings
I try to follow
But I constantly break
I try to be me
But what I am is fake
I set and wait
For what life might bring;
It brings me a song
And takes me along,
Farther away from where I belong
I try to stop listening
But it's a hell'va significant noise,
Listening is no choice…
so can i call that a poem...am i a poet? =S
if not, what makes a poem a poem?
good to kno that
cause i was having doubts ...
and i do write a lot of poems
that's one of the most recent poems i wrote:
Significant noise
When all lights are off
Every breath is gone
And sounds are down
I would still hear a significant noise
Trembling strings
The song he sings
I try to follow
But I constantly break
I try to be me
But what I am is fake
I set and wait
For what life might bring;
It brings me a song
And takes me along,
Farther away from where I belong
I try to stop listening
But it's a hell'va significant noise,
Listening is no choice…
so can i call that a poem...am i a poet? =S
if not, what makes a poem a poem?

good to kno that

cause i was having doubts ...
and i do write a lot of poems
