Can anyone give me advice on the wording of my online dating profile is this good

what would you think? Is this good is there anything you would suggest. I know its long so bear with me.

I am unlike most guys, I really can't understand or relate to most people in my own gender which is hard for me, most guys I met are obsessed with sex, sports, and superficial things. The thing that makes me the most frustrated is as a guy the focus and almost expectation from guys and girls alike on being aggressive and tough I think its just stupid (just saying that I know some people will press the backspace button and look for other profiles, I really don't care I want to get to know people who will accept me for me) As Marilyn Manson put it "haters call me *****, call, me ******, call me whitie but I am something you will never be". I want to be a kind and caring person, who is emotional, deep, and enjoys both the simple and finer/cultured things of life. Also its not that I hate sex, like every other guy on earth its something I think about and enjoy BUT sex without love is empty and meaningless there is so much more to people than looks alone, and sex is a connection on a spiritual level that can be cosmic and wonderful and deep its a lot better that way. Plus looks alone matters not in the end, and sports is a distraction for the masses who are unhappy with their mundane lives, and hollowwood (yeah I know I borrowed that word from a stone sour music video) doesn't usually preach anything that is not status quo and conformist. Its a shame what plastic dolls the mainstream media and culture has turned so many into.

I like Strange and unique people, and anyone that doesn't try to be popular or cool best especially if you have a passion for things of a darker nature in a creative way. I absolutely hate conformist normies, and superficial status quo abiding people, that is my biggest turn off.
My favorite quote is something I saw spray painted on an item at Recycle Ann Arbor (one of the coolest places in Ann Arbor other than Crazy Wisdom Bookstore and Fleetwood Diner) "Reality is a product of a dysfunctional life so sometimes its best just to put on headphones and listen to music and tune it all out and make the pain go away".

I am looking for a deep cosmic connection with someone, and intelligent, emotional and deep conversations that provoke thought, and idealistic dreaminess. I dream that one day I can find my soul mate and the love of my life (Ok this is a dating site so I will reveal that) more realistically though It would be nice to at least meet some people who I can relate too and that have similar intrests. I am a relaxed and spontaneous, a lot of people say I can make them laugh just by being myself. I like to laugh, and take pleasure in the simple things of life, I am not really picky.So far as music I like many things especially anything deep, emotional or that has meaning. I like walks outside, and exploring new places. I am not much of a party person and I like more getting to know people one on one. I am also a more romantic type person and like cuddling etc

I love dark themed artwork, and horror movies etc, Music is like one of my major passions. I went to broadcasting school and have always dreamed of having something to do with music people tell me I have a good voice (though I am not sure that will ever happen but I am an idealistic dreamer type). Music is a great conveyor of emotions and brings out things that can touch people at a level that is beyond human words Here is an example of what I mean http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wfI11wbAx… . Anyways the other thing that can transmit that is buildings and structures just like music often if you listen to the entire collection of an artists songs tells a story every building also has a story, that fascinates me to no end especially ghost towns and abandon buildings. When I was younger I lived in Bay City Mi and there was this whole block along the river that was abandon. I went in two of the houses and on many occasions and tried to piece together the story of what happened, why they were like that, etc. I love photography and try to capture emotion and meaning behind places sometimes but have yet to be able to convey it to most people. There must be some special way to do that that not many have found yet. Another interest of mine is the 1960's. I am passionate about almost all progressive causes, and I agree that its sad that so much is spent on war while in the inner cities Americans are starving and dieing. I like learning about ancient culture too.

I think the thing that sets me apart from most people is I am very relaxed and see the world with optimism and enjoy nature. I am not materialistic or judgmental so feel free to be yourself around me. The other thing is people see me as very kind and loyal. One thing about me is I don't care about all the superficial things I accept people for who they are.
 
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