Can anybody revise this for me? easy essay, about me!?

Bridget M

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When asked to introduce myself in a paragraph or what have you, I find myself in a difficult situation. Do I know myself too well to do this properly? Or not nearly well enough? I suppose I could start with the basics. I am Mary Bridget, named for my dad’s third grade crush, go by Bridget. I love M&Ms, both the candy and rapper from my hometown (Detroit). I am grossed out by grape and banana flavored candy. But who am I really? I am a daughter. I am a sister. I am an artist. I am a child of God. I am a fighter for what I believe in. I am a flawed person. I am a procrastinator. I cry when I hear of injustice, I laugh when I see cats falling on YouTube. I cannot tell a joke worth anything, but can come up with a smart remark on the spot if I must. Above all, I hope in the future. I can overcome hardship. I have a support system. I am grateful for who I am and who I have around me. I can see myself in year to come disturbing the universe by doing the most good I can to the most people I can.

I wanna close this off. Ideas? Thanks a million.
 
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