Bristol Lane

I liked the song and the intro was good. However, the editing of the video as a whole could be much improved. It just wasn't dynamic enough and to be honest with you, the song itself is the only thing holding the interest if you know what I mean. I.e. if it were better visuals, you'd capture much more interest.

I'm only saying this because my daughter works in this field and is a VJ artist at concerts etc and it's her job to jazz up music. :)

But I really do think you guys are good. I loved the music. :)
 
I think the bottom line is that a music video is supposed to enhance the song but here the song has to do all the work. A simple improvement would be to try to match the images to the rhythm to give it a more exciting feel.
 
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