Books and Authors: What do you think of this little blurb for my story?

Ritsuka

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(I actually accomplished something, so any answers that scream ‘cliché’ to me wouldn’t matter.)


After the death of his older brother, Blake, Zackary’s life falls into a downward spiral. His brother, the only one who ever cared for him and loved him, was forever gone. Unable to cope with the pain, Zackary discovers that his pain may only be skin deep. Cutting becomes a quick escape, and later on an addiction that he can’t break out of alone.
@?-??????g-? i?si?? yo?r ?i??: Your answer made me smile. I'm not posting it online. Sorry.

@xxmercredixx: The entire story isn't about cutting. It's about death being part of the life cycle, struggle against nature, friendship and love. Cutting, being his addiction, is just part of one of the many themes I have planned.
 
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