Beginning of my raunchy poem... what do you think?

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can’t say I understand
The hold you have on me
I shiver when you touch my hand
You set my spirit free

I love the way you look at me
You tease me with that smile
I battle with the bubbling glee
I may just stay a while…

Inhibitions that were before
When thoughts go back to her
Seem to retreat back out the door
My guilt appears to blur

I look at you though you turn away
I wonder what you think
So many feelings to convey
They’re coming to the brink

I so want you to touch me
To feel skin upon my skin
I’m silently begging you to see
That I’m trembling within...

Don't think I should post the rest ;)
 
Post the rest.....I want to read it
I really like it so far :) unless it's too personal and you don't want to of course
 
thats......amazing, and i usually dont give out complements. dont post the rest though. but that really was great
 
AMAZING!
But I'm not to good with THAT kind of poetry/dirty...erm...you know...Anyway, it's good, the couplet poetry in your poem is great! Answer mine, if you could, thanks!
 
I Have A 14 Year Old Niece And A 13 Year Old Niece That Come Online So No I Think You Are Right Not To Post The Rest
This Is Not Something I WOuld Want Them To See Even By Accident
 
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