BAA! Hey um, i've written poems, want to know what people think :) i've posted one here?

Super K

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It's about like...an affair I think, sounds kinda depressing but ya know poetic license and all that
I just kind of...typed... but yeah here it is:


Now I know two wrongs don't make a right
Yet tonight
I hold another 'lover' tight
Insight
Of the fact that not too long ago your touch was felt
By forbidden flesh in sin delight
So it's in anothers arms that my love for will hide
As the story is twisted and tables are turned
Revenge is sweet yet not as sweet as the sweet sweet love you and i once shared
The curse that tortured us both for time
One escaped to taint the purity
Once the one I could call mine
You changed who you were to me
Ruined what was meant to be
Your decreasing love for me is a tragedy
Yet still you mean the world to me
I feel you worth these tears, these scars
And that's what beats my breaking heart....

Sophie Bishop
 
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