Atomic Bomb, tell me if this is good,?

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On Augest 6 1945 the first nuclear bomb to hit Hiroshima was the atomic bomb by the U.S.A nealry killing as many as 140 000 people.

the 2nd bomb was hit in Nagasaki by the end of 1945, killing 80 000 people. Six day after the bomb attack the Japan annonced thier surrender to the allied power

any suggestion? if you guys have anymore ideas please tell me,.
 
First correct your spelling or your going to get an F . and it's code Name was the (Device) . It traveled to the ISLAND it took off from on a single ship traveling alone across the Atlantic. At the End of the war the Japanese cheered by the thousands when they heard one of their subs had sunk that ship .. Of all aboard only a few hundred survived the Japanese refused to pick them up They became shark food . The Device was developed at Los Alamos .
 
First correct your spelling or your going to get an F . and it's code Name was the (Device) . It traveled to the ISLAND it took off from on a single ship traveling alone across the Atlantic. At the End of the war the Japanese cheered by the thousands when they heard one of their subs had sunk that ship .. Of all aboard only a few hundred survived the Japanese refused to pick them up They became shark food . The Device was developed at Los Alamos .
 
dude that looks like u went on wikipedia and copy and pasted all the important stuff

add some filler man
 
How about this/ (use it if you want too)

On August 6,1945, president Harry Truman dropped a nuclear bomb on Hiroshima, the atom bomb, which killed as many as 140,000 people. Another bomb was dropped on Nagasaki by the end on 1945, killing another 80,000 people. Six days later, Japan surrendered to the allied powers.
 
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