Are you lost if you know where you are? Poem, comments?

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Shoulder to shoulder in
slow moving crowd, her
wide, innocent eyes beheld
the famed castle, capturing
the full focus of her imaginings
she took the hand of the man
next to her, wanting her father to
lead their way to its entrance
and continued to walk with
eyes full of delight until
she looked up to share her
excitement with him, only
to discover she was holding
the hand of a stranger who
wore a sinister grin and
held her hand even tighter,
she looked around, but her
father was nowhere in sight
and she knew exactly where
she was....she was lost....

lost in the crowd
at Disneyland.
Dragon: This, indeed, happened to me. Since then, when I am lost, I always know where I am....there are many Disneyland's in life.
 
What a horrifying scenario - beautifully written.

You put me on emotional roller coasters Ma!!
 
This is scary...well done!
I actually know someone this happened to, except for the fact that both of them were startled not to be holding the hand of loved ones who then appeared a short distance behind them (nothing sinister in that case, but as a young child he was still scared initially).
 
that happened to my younger brother at Disney World and the stranger gladly gave him back, giggles.

Nice write this!
 
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